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May 21, 2024 15:01:16 GMT
Post by dans on May 21, 2024 15:01:16 GMT
Wow, I just discovered that I made an error that affects a lot of my stories. Not TOO major, but...
It was Blaze's idea to give Lily Lovelace the powers of Kali, and curse her transformation so that eventually she would become evil. I've shown Blaze and Satanus gloating over Lily's transformation several times, and each time, Satanus was boasting about his evil plot and Blaze was mocking him because it is taking so long. But it should have been the other way around.
I guess it's not a really noticeable issue - nobody else has pointed it out. I'll fix it in my next story. It will be tedious to fix - I'll have to capture all the appearances of these two in my stories and then edit the text and send to Doc to replace. Mostly just replace the names, but the descriptions of who is talking will also need to be changed; in most places I have Blaze with red skin and Satanus with black skin.
I can undertake this project, but not sure if it makes a big enough difference to spend time on it? What do you guys think?
I will get their roles right in the story I'm working on now...
Thanks for your thoughts!
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May 21, 2024 15:05:44 GMT
Post by dans on May 21, 2024 15:05:44 GMT
It _could_ be that it was taking too long and Blaze gave up on the plan, and Satanus adopted it as his own... after all, apparently Satanus actually cast the spell that powers and corrupts Lily/Shiva, although Blaze refers to it as 'our spell'. But it is clear from the original story that the whole idea of creating '...our own Captain Marvel...' was her idea, not his.
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Post by lawrenceliberty on May 31, 2024 22:04:37 GMT
Just curious, isn't S. mainly an E-1 villain who fought Superman and has a violent relationship with his wife Syrene?
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Jun 1, 2024 0:35:12 GMT
Post by johnreiter902 on Jun 1, 2024 0:35:12 GMT
Just curious, isn't S. mainly an E-1 villain who fought Superman and has a violent relationship with his wife Syrene? Different person (Satanis, not Satanus) the E-1 villain is an evil sorcerer from the distant future, not a demon
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Jun 1, 2024 16:35:34 GMT
Post by lawrenceliberty on Jun 1, 2024 16:35:34 GMT
Thank you. I am glad to see the difference. I've read more about the E-1 futuristic wizard.
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