Post by dans on Dec 12, 2020 20:00:33 GMT
I am revisiting a story I wrote years ago, wonder if you guys have any thoughts...
Ted Knight retired from being Starman because Doris strongly requested that he do so; she got a message from Doris in the future of an alternate timeline that he was going to be killed by a Dr. Doog at some indeterminate date. He was also having issues that made him susceptible to mental control, and an alien entity was able to take control of him at night. Under this control, he built a suit of superpowered combat aromr and began a short heroic career as Vic Valor. And eventually Dr. Doog killed Vic Valor, in a scene that was virtually identical to the death of Starman in the alternate future that Doris had witnessed. But the armor saved Ted's life, and broke the alien entity's mental control.
So Doris saw Vic Valor die (on TV). And she had been suspicious all along that Valor was really Ted. So, she is probably frantic after watching Valor die in a scene that was identical to the scene of Starman's death that she had also witnessed.
So she grabs her Gravity Rod and races to the scene. Ted is in the Valor armor, confused as heck, as he has no memories of his time as Valor. Doris is frantic because she thought Ted might be dead, and now she finds him alive, and she is furious because he broke his promise.
How do I write this scene? How does Ted convince Doris that he is not Valor and he has not broken his promise - but if he's not, what's he doing in the Valor armor? What can Ted possibly do to show that it wasn't him? The alien is gone, seemingly forever...
Thanks for any ideas or suggestions you might send my way.